Monday, July 19, 2010

Everything She Liked Cont.....

Startled by the loud noise of a heavy old door, she was surprised that a tiny nudge would cause such a sound. The door slowly reopened. A glimmer of sunlight graced the blue undertones in her ruby reds. Her pout was only slightly attractive and her pin dangled from a now disheveled curl.
"What do you want from me? Its best that you turn around and walk away. My friend is coming any moment now."
" Not very lady like to shut the door with such strong force."
" It was a slip of the wrist and I am not feeling very lady like. Best that you leave."
" Yeah well, do yourself a favor and get over whatever it is that floats in that crazy head of yours. An empty mind is quite liberating."
From the corner of his eye he could see the neighbor peeking through Dupioni silk curtains. He hesitated but turned around and hit the pavement. A quick glance over his shoulder left her with the impression that he would be back.


  1. Amy...I think you are on to something!!!

  2. I'm having a little trouble with the concept. . . .Not sure where you're heading.

  3. I find a mind filled with Scotch just as liberating. I like where you're going with this though.

  4. More to come? I just finished watching an episode of Mad Men - you seem to have a similar vibe going her in my little brain. Nice.

  5. Dialog has a nice spiciness to it. Your style is perfect fit for portraying these characters and sense of setting.